Re: A new track - this is good
I listened to both and what do you use to master the tracks? On ther first one "In too Deep" the bass is not normalized, additionally I do like the spaceyness of it.
I don't know your proficiency with production elements but normalizing the levels of your tracks as well as assigning each instrument its own "frequency" is important. When a piece clips it means that either 1. it is too loud 2. and as a result it will not give the full sound but only what it can allow up till it gets clipped.
I just finished my own track, it is far from being mastered but you will find that none of the sounds "collide" but thank god reason now has a mastering suite in it otherwise i used to take it into audacity and normalize the sound and do a parametric EQ . Good work, keep it up, and if you have any questions ask.
Here is a sample of my track that I am finishing up, I will gladly send you a link later tonight once I get finished with it.
[URL]http://www.freewebtown.com/fumanchu182/images/music/RestartDemo.mp3[/URL] 128kb