hi everyone at the production forum... I know we aren't that much. I'd like to share with you a track (of my own) I'm working on. I uploaded a demo version, just the bounce at the point I'm on right now. You always make positive comments, so feel free to make them this time again. They are useful to me, as I'm not PRO. thanks for the time you spend on it!
Diegoff

link: [url]http://soundcloud.com/diegoarv/f-days-demo[/url]

Re: New track (DEMO)

not bad...would maybe clear up the bass line a little and the beeping sound that comes in at around 3.07 is a bit much imo...kinda disturbs the flow of the track and removes some depth/darkness...

Re: New track (DEMO)

thanks Shpira! yes, the bass is extra loud, I didn't like it, but it was a mistake I made when I added a limiter in the output channel. I'll check the beeping sound, maybe let him live a shorter time. thanks!

Re: New track (DEMO)

I agree with Shprira, I really like the flow of the bass, pad, and drum tracks though. nice work.

Re: New track (DEMO)

thanks for the replys !!

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sounding good. besides what's been mentioned maybe turn that beep lead down i bit.. also the pads in general I find the gain high in the mix, and they could pump/suck more with the groove..no?

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^ working on that. thanks!

Re: New track (DEMO)

updated

[URL]http://soundcloud.com/diegoarv/f-days-diegoff[/URL]