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New Track - Ny'ay
3 durable postsStarted 2008-01-06Latest 2008-01-26
Re: New Track - Ny'ay
ok. i like the parts, but you need some variation imo.
it just seems to drag on... that melody is nice (the one that startrs around 4.10), but it just seems to go on and on. you need to change that. maybe using it less, or automate the dekay/release on it throughout the track or add some efx to it.... maybe the song is too long? dunno, i like it... but maybe you just need to work on the arrangement a bit.
its a great start ben ... build on it.
Re: New Track - Ny'ay
thanks for the constructive feedback shawn