Uploaded my first two tracks

feedback appreciated

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Listening to Social Recluse right now bro. NICE song. The only thing I would change is to put some more percussion in it. The hi hats don't sound like they belong to the track. The kind of give the track a bit of a jerky feel where the rest is smooth as silk.

Keep it up...finish it up real good then send it to a ton of labels...I bet it gets picked up.

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cheers for the feedback lad.

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i'm 31 and he's 24 and he's calling me lad. I love ya bro!!!

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where i come from everydody say' lad

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lol. Well keep at it bro.

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So the first track has interesting melody but it sounds empty and overall i dont like it. It needs more powerful drum loop, more bass, more everything.

Your second track, "Telescopic", has a better atmosphere because of that bass in background. Why are you using so much reeverb on percussion instruments and on claps*/snares in both tracks?

Ok, maybe it differs from taste to taste but i dont like so much reeverb on perc. elements.

Second track has good bass when its playing in background, but when you boost the filter and bass changes i dont like it. The synth that later comes in is nice.

Overall i rate your tracks 5/10 each.

Cheers

Rie [URL="http://www.myspace.com/Rie3000"]www.myspace.com/Rie3000[/URL]

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thanks for the feedback rie. perhaps im still a bit heavy on the reverb at times.

im still learning.