[url]http://www.scdmusic.com/scd_clipping.mp3[/url]

whatcha think? i am tinkering with reason while away on business and sorely miss using logic (what i am doing this clip on). so you like the groove of it :?: thanks for listening :p

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Shawn....Listened tot he track....definitely sounds like your mixing a bit of electro with more proggy elements...keep at it.

One thing i'll tell ya, keep working on your track until you have worked on it so much that you don't think you could do anything else to it. Then let people hear it. I'll be happy to critique it then, just send me a PM and I'll be getting back to you.

It does have a nice groove...might wanna change it up about every 16 count just to keep people's attention.

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[quote=jeffrey collins;450530]Shawn....Listened tot he track....definitely sounds like your mixing a bit of electro with more proggy elements...keep at it.

One thing i'll tell ya, keep working on your track until you have worked on it so much that you don't think you could do anything else to it. Then let people hear it. I'll be happy to critique it then, just send me a PM and I'll be getting back to you.

It does have a nice groove...might wanna change it up about every 16 count just to keep people's attention.[/quote]

yea, probably the best idea. i am just antsy to get back to it being that i am away from home for a month for work and cannot do anything to it. i figured i would let some people hear a snipet, cause i was excited on how it sounded. i do have many plans to add shit to it, it was only 2 nights of work there ;) maybe why i should wait to post it eh :?:

mods take her down :lol:

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i think it sounds pretty good too, would love to hear the full thing when you finish

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cool track mate, sounds very acid house, i like it 8) i'd rave to it :D

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nahh, don't take it down. You're getting some good feedback here. Just keep at it bro, we all start out sucking. I'm just beginning to get good at production, though I keep forgetting certain things.

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thanks tiddle and bobby, i am looking forward to going home to work on it. when i finish it i will post it here :D

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Hey mate i have had 2 listens now.. i hope u dont mind some bad critisicm..The way i look at things like production is that make something you would play out.. Now the track is got a slight groove but thats where it ends.. I would get rid of those wossshing effect cause they have been done to death.. Also it does need a change in there.. like add on melody or something.. Also the drums sound really week. It might just be me though or the clip it self.. work on it mate like jeffrey collins said.. Hope i did not offend ya by the way..

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I don't like how that darker synth pans. Needs something to give it a little more power. Kinda seems like it doesn't go anywhere. I do really like what you have so far but it it seems unfinished

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thanks for the ears and the comments. i never get offended by bad feedback... if i wanted my balls licked id go to a bar and hit on fat chicks. yes there was little work put in and it is very unfinished (why jeff was right about me posting it too soon). well i havent went back to it yet as something am on now i am very excited about. i may come back to it and fill in the gaps.... thanks for listening :D