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NEW DESIGN For flash site

6 durable postsStarted 2006-09-24Latest 2006-09-25
#33003Post 1 of 6

[URL="file:///D:/jusus/http/design/coolweb/source.xml"]http://www.jususdesign.com/alliance.gif

[/URL]

#714854Post 2 of 6

Re: NEW DESIGN For flash site

umm. broken.

#714899Post 3 of 6

Re: NEW DESIGN For flash site

What's broken?

#714915Post 4 of 6

Re: NEW DESIGN For flash site

your link.

" [url]http://www.jususdesign.com/alliance.gif[/url] " = file:///D:/jusus/http/design/coolweb/source.xml

you have it mapped out to your hard drive, not the web sir.

#715057Post 5 of 6

Re: NEW DESIGN For flash site

I feel like it isn't very focused. No real concept or thought put into it. More or less just putting some elements together to make a "cool" looking site. The colors are nice and the ornamentation is dope.

However there is a disconnect between the elements (header, logo, background). The logotype looks very arbitrarily done, as does the header image. Like I have no idea what you are trying to tell me.

Put some thought into what this community is going to be and develop an image/style/set of ideas you wish to communicate. You'll find your work will improve a lot once you decide to start trying to actually communicate some ideas.

Hope this helps.

#715072Post 6 of 6

Re: NEW DESIGN For flash site

it's just a 1st version, in flash i'll connect all thing together :-)

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